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Flames of contempt fuel my heart's war. Destruction and chaos scorch my insides, burning away at my soul. Flames lick at my ribcage. My backdraft lashes out when you pry open my chest. Cries of the burned are absorbed into my bones. All that hate leaves behind are my ashes.
This is my submission for The Flame(s) Contest found here: [link]

I have to say, this was extremely hard to write. I was originally gonna go with using the hatred my OC Alex had for those who mocked him, but I couldn't find a way to make it work that I was happy with. So I scrapped that idea and decided to use real-life hate. This is half personal, half not. :P

I tried to use aspects of the human body with this. I also used my knowledge of house fires to help me, as well as the movie Backdraft. xD
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Cannon273's avatar
You know, as I'm looking through your gallery for your feature, I came across this... and I really like it. It really reminds me of my OC Ata. D:

You know, you and me should rp sometime...